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	<title>Comments on: LB&amp;LI: Writing Transformative Sex &#8211; Part 2</title>
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		<title>By: Donna S</title>
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		<dc:creator>Donna S</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2009 06:46:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another great post.  Thanks!!</description>
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		<title>By: Lea</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 02:03:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One question that comes to mind when a character&#039;s goal is not to have sex with someone (a goal that, of course, they never achieve if we do our job right!) is: What do I fear I will reveal (about myself, my life, etc)through intimacy with this person? This can be a good question to help explore a character&#039;s fears or motivation.

Can my name go in the hat, too, please? Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One question that comes to mind when a character&#8217;s goal is not to have sex with someone (a goal that, of course, they never achieve if we do our job right!) is: What do I fear I will reveal (about myself, my life, etc)through intimacy with this person? This can be a good question to help explore a character&#8217;s fears or motivation.</p>
<p>Can my name go in the hat, too, please? Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Helen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Helen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 15:27:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Please put my name in the hat!
Helen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Please put my name in the hat!<br />
Helen</p>
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		<title>By: kh</title>
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		<dc:creator>kh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 09:47:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>very informative information ladies
please enter me</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>very informative information ladies<br />
please enter me</p>
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		<title>By: Cora</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cora</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 02:21:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Echoing what the others said, those are very good questions. Can&#039;t think of any other now.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Echoing what the others said, those are very good questions. Can&#8217;t think of any other now.</p>
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		<title>By: Margay</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margay</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 01:42:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These are some great points to think about when writing the sex scene. Thanks for posting it.
Margay</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are some great points to think about when writing the sex scene. Thanks for posting it.<br />
Margay</p>
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		<title>By: Joely</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joely</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 01:21:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks everyone! 

Kait, definitely, WHY is one of my favorite questions.

Driftsmoke, haha, lifetime therapy.  I love it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks everyone! </p>
<p>Kait, definitely, WHY is one of my favorite questions.</p>
<p>Driftsmoke, haha, lifetime therapy.  I love it!</p>
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		<title>By: Nemhain</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nemhain</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 23:55:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Very interesting posts! I don&#039;t have any questions to add, though I&#039;m sure someone more intelligent will probably add something valuable later. Will keep an eye on this workshop.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very interesting posts! I don&#8217;t have any questions to add, though I&#8217;m sure someone more intelligent will probably add something valuable later. Will keep an eye on this workshop.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherri</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sherri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 20:42:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post! Just tossing my name in the hat. Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post! Just tossing my name in the hat. Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: MeganS.</title>
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		<dc:creator>MeganS.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 20:33:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These are really good questions, especially &quot;What’s the worst thing you think you might need?&quot; -- I keep coming back to that one, and pondering how I can dig deeper with my own characters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are really good questions, especially &#8220;What’s the worst thing you think you might need?&#8221; &#8212; I keep coming back to that one, and pondering how I can dig deeper with my own characters.</p>
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