Comments on: Friday Snippet - Hope’s Haven 5 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/ Dreaming in Rhyme Fri, 25 Jul 2008 18:04:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.2 by: Carter http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7633 Sat, 07 Jul 2007 11:06:19 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7633 Still loving it. The casual conversation during a pretty savage beating is really cool. Keep it coming. I love the Fades, BTW. I can just imagine what they are and what they do. Yikes! Still loving it. The casual conversation during a pretty savage beating is really cool. Keep it coming.

I love the Fades, BTW. I can just imagine what they are and what they do. Yikes!

]]> by: zette http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7632 Sat, 07 Jul 2007 04:56:38 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7632 Excellent again. This is a riviting story! Rack is a wonderful character, and you do great work with the lesser characters as well! Excellent again. This is a riviting story! Rack is a wonderful character, and you do great work with the lesser characters as well!

]]> by: Jean http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7630 Sat, 07 Jul 2007 00:17:55 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7630 I'm still looking for more... I’m still looking for more…

]]> by: MerylF http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7629 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 22:31:32 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7629 Love it, keep the story coming. I like that water protects him from the fades - I want to know more. Love it, keep the story coming. I like that water protects him from the fades - I want to know more.

]]> by: Gabriele http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7628 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 19:11:02 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7628 What a cool world. And I'm developing into a Rackman fangirl. :) What a cool world. And I’m developing into a Rackman fangirl. :)

]]> by: cherylp http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7626 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 18:52:49 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7626 Rack is quite determined. You did a great job making me sympathize with him by making him willing to sacrifice so much to get to her. Rack is quite determined. You did a great job making me sympathize with him by making him willing to sacrifice so much to get to her.

]]> by: Christine d'Abo http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7623 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 14:49:17 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7623 AHHH I missed last weeks! I'm going to have to go back and read both on my lunch hour! AHHH I missed last weeks! I’m going to have to go back and read both on my lunch hour!

]]> by: Ann http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7619 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:57:18 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7619 Great snippet. But now we have to wait another week to find out if he reaches her- Sigh. Great snippet. But now we have to wait another week to find out if he reaches her- Sigh.

]]> by: Jess http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7617 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:36:18 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7617 Fabulous. The line about Hank was so perfect - we really got a sense of these guards in such a short time. You do a good job with making every character count. Fabulous. The line about Hank was so perfect - we really got a sense of these guards in such a short time. You do a good job with making every character count.

]]> by: IanT http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7615 Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:41:50 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/05/friday-snippet-hopes-haven-5/#comment-7615 Good stuff, again - this is really flowing well. There's the makings of a great action-adventure here. 'Fade' is a good name. :-) And a nice just-in-passing introduction to a concept. Good stuff, again - this is really flowing well. There’s the makings of a great action-adventure here.

‘Fade’ is a good name. :-) And a nice just-in-passing introduction to a concept.

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