Comments on: Friday Snippet - Spires of Secrecy http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/ Dreaming in Rhyme Fri, 25 Jul 2008 17:31:34 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.2 by: Joely Sue Burkhart » Blog Archive » Friday Snippet - Spires of Secrecy 2 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8234 Fri, 03 Aug 2007 03:57:15 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8234 [...] Spires, part 1 Spires closed in, forming a canyon of black rock and sculpted waves of pristine snow. No tracks. Nobody had come this way in ages. Above, the wind howled like a beast so loudly that she barely heard the voices. Feet numb and legs wobbling, she fell against the rock wall and edged closer, shivering uncontrollably. [...] […] Spires, part 1 Spires closed in, forming a canyon of black rock and sculpted waves of pristine snow. No tracks. Nobody had come this way in ages. Above, the wind howled like a beast so loudly that she barely heard the voices. Feet numb and legs wobbling, she fell against the rock wall and edged closer, shivering uncontrollably. […]

]]> by: Amy Ruttan http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8136 Sat, 28 Jul 2007 16:58:57 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8136 Good hook. Ooh I want more MORE. I would have stopped by Friday but my internet and cable crashed. I had no TV, no Internet and it made Amy go something, something. Go Crazy? Don't mind if I do. Sorry, still a little residual crazy there. ;) Good hook. Ooh I want more MORE. I would have stopped by Friday but my internet and cable crashed. I had no TV, no Internet and it made Amy go something, something. Go Crazy? Don’t mind if I do.

Sorry, still a little residual crazy there. ;)

]]> by: Joely http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8132 Sat, 28 Jul 2007 00:25:04 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8132 Thanks, guys, for your opinions. I'm hoping I can finish it this weekend.... Thanks, guys, for your opinions. I’m hoping I can finish it this weekend….

]]> by: MerylF http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8131 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 23:05:52 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8131 Hmm, interesting beginning! I do like the way the planet is an antag all on its own :) Hmm, interesting beginning! I do like the way the planet is an antag all on its own :)

]]> by: cherylp http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8129 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 19:20:30 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8129 Great description, Joely! Here it is, the dead of summer, and I felt like it was the dead of winter after your descriptive sentences! Brrrr. Great description, Joely! Here it is, the dead of summer, and I felt like it was the dead of winter after your descriptive sentences! Brrrr.

]]> by: Crystal http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8128 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 18:20:50 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8128 I want a ridiculously frivolous red coat! Definitely want to see where this is going! I want a ridiculously frivolous red coat! Definitely want to see where this is going!

]]> by: Krista http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8126 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 16:41:13 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8126 This sounds like a wonderful start, Joely. A gothic romance anthology, huh? Sounds promising. I hope you make your deadline and the story knocks their socks off. This sounds like a wonderful start, Joely.

A gothic romance anthology, huh? Sounds promising. I hope you make your deadline and the story knocks their socks off.

]]> by: Nicole http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8125 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 16:37:20 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8125 Death by exposure wasn't his MO... heh. Great start, and would hook my interest for sure. :) Death by exposure wasn’t his MO… heh. Great start, and would hook my interest for sure. :)

]]> by: Sterculian Rhetoric http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8124 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 16:11:07 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8124 "...No one in their right mind would choose to live on this ice cube...." I concur, Soviet Canuckistan is like that. Minus 35 Celsius for two straight months(January and February). I go to S.E. Asia for the winter. The sacrifice of function for form, the bane of the West! Great story girlfriend. “…No one in their right mind would choose to live on this ice cube….”

I concur, Soviet Canuckistan is like that. Minus 35 Celsius for two straight months(January and February). I go to S.E. Asia for the winter.
The sacrifice of function for form, the bane of the West!
Great story girlfriend.

]]> by: Gabriele http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8123 Fri, 27 Jul 2007 15:10:53 +0000 http://joelysueburkhart.com/blog/2007/07/26/friday-snippet-spires/#comment-8123 I thought Goths wear black? :) If the heat here doesn't cease soon, can I have the directions for ice cube planet? It sounds sorta comfortable right now. :D I thought Goths wear black? :)

If the heat here doesn’t cease soon, can I have the directions for ice cube planet? It sounds sorta comfortable right now. :D

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