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Sundries

Re: book chat with Cindy — I noticed she hasn’t posted her portion yet.  When she does, I’ll provide the link.

The writing is slow going.  Couple of hundred words here and there.  Why, yes, I am in another nagging scene.  How did you know?  (Because they always slow me down.  I might have to skip this one and get my momentum going again.)

We drove down to Joplin today to visit My Beloved Sis and take her some frozen meat our dad, Papa from Mexico, had brought her on Thanksgiving, which she forgot.  Papa was supposed to come babysit the monsters while we celebrated our wedding anniversary early by eating at my favorite restaurant, Mythos, but Papa has pneumonia!  Not so bad that he needed to be hospitalized, but we definitely didn’t want him driving down here and exhausting himself trying to keep Middle Monster from setting something on fire.

So we changed things around a little and decided to drive down later and see the light display in Carthage.  Aunt BB and Uncle J happened to call while we were on the way, and they decided to follow us.  We visited with Molly awhile and then we all met up at Grand Fortuna, a delicious Chinese buffet.  We also drove around town, showed the monsters our first apartment That Man and I had together, as well as the Missouri Southern campus where I graduated.

A trip to Joplin would not be complete without a stop by Books A Million (we don’t have one here).  Remind me never to take the monsters in there again.  Every book they wanted was ridiculously pricy.  As much as it pained me, I had to deny them a book there, and promised their choice at a more reasonably priced store.  I was able to find book 2 and 3 of Brent Weeks’ fantasy assassin series.  I made the mistake of beginning book 1 the other day and it’s really good.  (I’m not supposed to read anything until I finish Return.)

Once Return is done, stand back, I’ll fall on that entire series like a starving pack of wolves.

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Book Chat with Cindy Lynn Speer

This summer, I was priviledged to chat in depth with Cindy after reading The Chocolatier’s Wife released by Drollerie Press around the same time as Beautiful Death.  Events conspired against us so we’re just not getting this “chat” published on our blogs, but we had a great time discussing the story behind the books and general writing.  We plan on posting part of our “back and forth” chat every Friday until we finally stopped talking shop.  This is very informal, so there may be some overlap…or some juicy tidbit extras!

First off, let me say how much I enjoyed The Chocolatier’s Wife (TCW).  This sweet romance really tugs on the heart-strings.  I absolutely adored the little touches between Tasmin and William.  For most of their lives, their courtship happens through letters.  It’s sort of a fluke, really, that they were even “matched” by the magic that determines who should marry.

Little things speak so loudly, though.  It’s the care and consideration between the two of them that really makes this story so sweet, long before they ever meet face to face.  The small considerations between these characters really shows how they fall in love bit by bit.  Love comes softly for these characters, and it’s beautiful to watch.

We thought it would be interesting to delve deeper into our stories, because they are on opposite ends of the spectrum, really, for what our niche micropress Drollerie Press is really all about.  Beautiful Death is violent and quite sexy, where TCW is softer and subtler, but BOTH stories combine magic and romance into what we think is a rather rich and unique tapestry.  Both stories are transformative, because I assure you, William is never the same after Tasmin blows into his life, and Isabella can only learn what it truly means to be a “monster” after she becomes a monster herself.

So the first thing we started talking about was the “story behind the story.”  Here was Cindy’s response:

What started my book was a sort of goofy confluence.  It was nearing Christmas and my then department chair had given me a tower of chocolate…different boxes with all these lovely things inside.  And I had just watched a movie with an actor in it who I was wishing was in more roles…and as i was opening the box, I was wondering what I would like to see him in.  And I took a bite of this square of chocolate…it was, sincerely, one of the best pieces of chocolate I’d ever eaten…and the idea flooded into my head, even the title.

Sounds yummy, yes?  So head over to Cindy’s blog and read my response about Beautiful Death and its original inspiration.

Next week, we’ll continue with the next question, where I said:

Oooh, so you know I’ve got to ask:  who was the actor and what was the movie?

Then we got to talking about “casting” our characters.

And since it’s been quite a while since I posted anything about Beautiful Death, I’ll post an excerpt.  This piece provides some of the backstory about how Isabella became “Beautiful Death.”  Although she doesn’t know it at the time, this “alien” is Hades.  Not exactly your everyday run-of-the-mill “first meet” in a romance.  :roll:  :wink:

Without opening her eyes, she knew someone watched, very close, the stirring of air warning her that a hand stretched toward her.  She exploded into action, rolling to the side and scooping up the knife that she always kept nearby.  Huddled with her back to the wall, she felt her heart stutter with dread.

This monster was the real thing. 

The alien spun silvered rainbows through the alley, leaving her nowhere to hide.  He squatted down to her level, as though that would fool her into trusting him.  “Isabella.  I’ve come to help you.  Your father–”

A cold sweat coated her skin, but she couldn’t hold back the laughter.  Ragged, shrill with grief and rage, her voice grated like broken glass.  “Even if you weren’t a monster, I’d know you were lying.  My father’s the last person I ever want to see again.”

A sound jerked her attention behind him.  More aliens had her sister.

“I’m tired.”  Amelia lay in one of the alien’s arms like a helpless baby, and the look of resignation on her face made bile burn up Isabella’s throat.  “I’m dirty and cold and starving.  I just want to go home.  He said we’d be safe, Bella.  If not…”  she shrugged, “at least it’ll be over.”

Fight!  Why don’t you fight?  Don’t lie there and let them kill you!  “There is no home.  Mom’s dead, and Daddy’s never coming back.  Don’t you understand?  There is no safety!  If they don’t kill you, their virus will!”

Choking on tears of rage, her throat hurt, her eyes burning.  Otherwise, she’d have seen the alien coming at her.

The bastard was good, she’d give him that.  He seized her right arm, his thumb pressing on her tendon until her nerveless fingers dropped the knife, while he pinned her against his body with his other arm.  For all his size and power, he made one monumental error.  He treated her carefully, as though she were just a fifteen-year-old kid, half starved and scared shitless, as though she hadn’t seen people tearing each other apart for food or killed to keep herself alive.

She lunged up and buried her pitiful human teeth in his neck, tearing at that vulnerable pale skin.

The alien’s body jolted against hers, silver burning higher.  Glass shattered in the windows of the abandoned highrise.  Street lamps that had long ago quit working exploded like fireworks.  The ground trembled, glass and metal tinkling, debris falling all around them.

“Bella.”  The alien’s voice sounded shaken, hushed, not filled with fury or pain like she’d expected.  The fool released her hands and cupped her head tighter to his throat, curling his body around hers protectively.  “Your father sent me to you.  I mustn’t…”

Then you’re dead, she thought, fisting her hands in the ridiculously long, pretty hair about his shoulders.  She yanked his head back further and tore deeper at his throat, determined to rip her way to his spine, but he still didn’t release her.  His power burned higher, sinking into her, melting her bones, and swirling rainbows sucked her down into an endless pit of darkness.

Her heart pounded harder, her mind screaming with terror, but her body slipped into neutral while he siphoned off her energy.  Her strength, hatred, and rage that powered her ferocious will to live disappeared in an instant.

He’s feeding on me.  He’s eating me alive.

She’d seen the horrors, watched as the aliens drained their victims and left them mindless shells to die twitching and screaming when the virus struck.  She’d hated those weaklings and despised their stupidity, never understanding the horrific compelling need to give up the fight. 

There was nothing she could do to stop him; worse, the longer he fed, the less she wanted him to stop.

Rest, peace, safety, all lies he silently promised while he crushed her against him and drained her lifeforce.  Surrender, his body purred against hers.  Death won’t be so bad.  I’ll be gentle, sweet, good, I promise.

His blood coated her face, filled her mouth, and slid down her throat in a hot, liquid flood, but she was the one dying.  Little by little, Isabella flickered lower, a candle guttering in the silent, cold night.  Her defenses crumbled.  He was all around, inside her, soaking her up, drinking her most horrible dreams and memories, seducing her to death.

Lost, all she could think about was how incredibly good his blood tasted.

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NaNo Day 34

I’m almost ashamed to post my word count for the day.  That Man is on a business trip to Chicago, so needless to say, dealing with the monsters has been exciting to say the least.  I didn’t make it up dark & early this morning, which put me behind immediately.  Tonight all three girls had basketball practice, with barely enough time to eat and get to the gym.  Then I had to entertain the two youngest for the final hour while Princess Monster had her practice.  Sigh.  We didn’t even get home until 8:00 p.m. and then it was baths, phone calls to Daddy, etc.

I need a couple of valium, a bottle of wine, and some Calgon, because my head is ROARING.

I took the laptop with me but it was so loud and hectic that I got very little done.  Plus, I’m in a difficult scene.  One Blood was hurt rather badly and this horrible realization came over me thanks to Molly’s comment the other day about manly bits.  *dies*  I suddenly froze up and questioned what the heck I was actually *saying* with this particular injury.  I finally decided to play it out and see where it goes.  I can always cut this scene later.

Today:  884

NaNo Total:  77.355

Snippet:  This is actually from the end of yesterday’s scene.  Nothing I wrote tonight is appropriate or acceptable.

Slowly, she unsheathed the white knife.

The Black Dragon reared its head expectantly.  Knives implied blood.  Her blood?  Hunger unfurled within him like sweeping black wings.  He couldn’t help but lick his lips with anticipation.  He’d do anything, anything at all, to taste her blood again.

Two blades bit into his neck, one on either side, and each Blood dropped a hard, unyielding hand on his shoulder.

“You don’t trust me if she bleeds.”  Mykal smiled and didn’t try to hide the dragon rising in him.  “Good.  You shouldn’t.”

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Elf Yourself

Do you know why I write like a maniac?  Because if I don’t keep these characters busy, this is what it’s like in my head.

Send your own ElfYourself eCards

This one is Rhaekhar (Kevin Sorbo), Gregar (not a very good picture of Adrian Paul), Hades (Jason Isaacs), Ruin (The Rock), and Conn (Clive Owen).

Send your own ElfYourself eCards

This one has a little better pictures of Gregar and Rhaekhar, with Christian Bale (yet to be written Given In Fire novella), Charon (Vin Diesel), and Conn (Clive Owen). This one about made me wet my pants I laughed so hard. 

Huge thanks to Dixie Bell for the link!

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NaNo Day 33

I had a huge realization after I went to bed last night. 

See, the most precious thing has been happening with this story.  In that dreamy land between awake and asleep when I first go to bed, I’ve been dreaming Story.  I love it.  I wish it happened every single night, but what I’ve learned is that it really only happens when I’m DEEP in the Well.  When every comment or song or image has the power to speak to me in the language of that particular story.  When I hear a song and unexpectedly nearly burst into tears because it reminds me of the emotion in the story.

THAT’s magic, and what drives me as a writer.  I love those moments.

So there I lay last night, drifting off to sleep, and I realized I had not yet done enough redeeming in order for Mykal to receive his heart’s desire.  I was missing something.  Or rather, he had not yet rid himself of something.  I dreamed his Dream, then, and it took everything I thought I knew and turned it all on its head again, yet fits perfectly with everything I’ve known all along.  I know that doesn’t make sense, exactly, but that’s why it’s so cool.

And of course, the key with Mykal is that he can always do what her Blood cannot.  That’s his gift to her, and his danger.

Today: 2,637  3,447

NaNo Total: 75,661 76,471

Snippet:  I adore this scene.  It brings Keldari culture and directly applies it to the plot and characterization.  If you’ve read the Keldari Fire novellas and have seen “My water is yours,” this is what it all means underneath the surface.

An intolerable eternity later, she finally pushed tiredly up out of her chair and led the way toward her bedchamber without a single glance in Mykal’s direction.  He could almost convince himself she’d forgotten about his presence entirely, but a tenseness remained in her shoulders even after she shut the door and privacy was ensured.

Outwardly, she remained controlled and calm.  The First Blood helped remove her armor, he and the red-haired warrior speaking to her soothingly, giving her the intimate little touches that spoke of great affection and dedication.  Inwardly, though, Mykal swore a fierce storm blew in her so cold that it burned.  She felt brittle and sharp in his mind, as though…

As though she might break.

Sympathy and understanding welled within him.  She’d nearly lost those she held most dear, after already suffering great loss.  She needed to release this storm of emotion with her beloved, but she dared not break down before him, a man she rightfully did not trust.  He watched, silently, trying to decide whether she would most appreciate the dragon or the savage.  Should he offer arrogance, and thus drive her to battle and violence?  Or better yet, he would once more do what her Blood could not.

“In the desert,” he began, ignoring the fierce glares from her two closest warriors, “I would offer you what small water I possessed in exchange for hospitality.  Whether you accepted me into your tent only, or your sepah, the entire encampment, or not at all, would be entirely up to you.  Keldar is a hard land, a hard life, and you might as easily kill me where I knelt.  Water is all in the desert, more precious than blood or family, and if you accepted me, you would be required to share your stores with me.  Most guests are killed outright to spare the water, so to offer hospitality first with no gift from me, and then allow me into your private tent, is truly rare.”

She listened but couldn’t look at him. 

Slowly so as not to alarm her guard, he unbuckled the leather straps crossed over his chest and disarmed himself, handing his weapons to the nearest warrior.  Letting the taamid slip to the floor, he held his hands palm forward at his sides and slowly moved closer.   Both warriors bristled, but he came only near enough so she could breathe his scent and touch him if she desired, where he knelt at her feet. 

“Once accepted, a guest is often proven more loyal than even a rav or brother by blood.  He’s been given water, the most precious commodity in all the desert, followed by shelter from the punishing sun.  A guest who dared to kill or harm his host would be the vilest of all creatures, worse than any scavenger or jackal.  We Keldari would rather take by force or die in the attempt than sneak and steal a single drop of water.

“My water is yours.”  He softened his voice and hung his head, deliberately shaking his hair forward to hide his face.  “My heart is yours, my very life.”

Still loose, his hair pooled on the white marble like the foul oil slick spreading in his soul.  Shadowed he may be, but he came on bended knee and offered all that he had, willingly, to her, with no pride, no honor, to stand between them.  If he didn’t think she’d regret the loss too greatly, he’d hack off his hair, the last symbol of honor that he did not deserve.

“You accepted me as guest into your private tent.”  He bowed low, pressing his mouth to the white floor.  He rose slightly, and then leaned closer, slowly stretching out his head to press his lips to her boot.  “That you might additionally offer a single, precious tear humbles me, brightheart.” 

Her breath snagged loudly in her throat, the sob bitten off before it could escape, but her bond shimmered with rains and winds that had not graced the desert in a thousand years and more.

Keeping his eyes low so as not to force aggression on her warriors, he carefully lifted his mouth and pressed a chaste kiss to the back of her right hand.  “You made a promise to your Red.  Let not my presence as guest interfere.”

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NaNo Day 32 Part 2

I got on a roll tonight.  When you read this snippet, you’ll understand why.  After 70K+ of Dancing the Blades through dreams and plots, Shannari and Mykal finally recognized each other and stood face to face.

Part 2 Session: 2,570

NaNo Total: 73,024

Snippet:  Longer, but you’ll see why.

“What of us, Your Majesty?” 

Slowly, she turned back to the waiting tals.  She quickly glanced at each, unwilling to scrutinize them openly, but she still couldn’t tell one from another.  Sandalwood smelled stronger, but it came from all three.  He must be deliberately sharing his scent with the others to mask his presence. 

Which irritated her to no end.  She’d hinted that she could smell him all the way from Shanhasson.  Why did it matter if she knew which tal was the one from her Dreams?  Did he not hold her bond?  Had he not won her blood?  Eyes narrowed, she tugged on that black bond in her mind, willing him to betray himself with a sound, a move, but they all three stood silent and proud.

Her gaze lingered on the last warrior.  His heavy cloak had fallen about his shoulders, revealing loose hair as black as hers, gleaming with oil in the sunlight.  The other tals wore their hair tightly pulled back from their faces in one long braid down their backs.  His hair blended with the cape so that she couldn’t tell how long it was exactly, but it looked incredibly soft and shiny.  If it smelled like sandalwood…

Unconsciously, she took a step closer.  Dharman bumped into her slightly, warning her back, breaking the moment of attraction.  Behind her, Sal muttered beneath his breath, “It’s always the hair.  I wonder if she’d love me as much if I shaved mine off.”

“You’re welcome to try,” she growled.  

Sal laughed and gave a little toss of his head so his blood-auburn hair tumbled over her shoulder.

She fisted her hand in that heavy silk and tugged firmly, drawing a low rumble from him.  “You know I’d love you bald, but I’d much rather have your hair wrapped around me at night, if only to annoy Dharman.”

Despite their teasing, the tal didn’t miss that moment of intensity, and his eyes widened slightly.  She even thought they lightened a moment, a cast of silver, perhaps?  She didn’t dare study him openly, and at her next glance, his eyes were just as dark as the others’.  For whatever reason, the Black Dragon wished to remain hidden among his comrades, so she’d play along.  For now.

“One of you,” she stared at each tal a moment, letting him feel the pulse of holy water in her gaze, “already bears my bond.  One of you already wears my mark in his flesh.  One of you is already bound to me heart and soul.  If you three and your ravs wish to accompany me to the Palace, I’ll allow it, but no other Keldari may enter the Shining Walls.  To cross the Gate without my permission will bring your death.”

“And the challenge?”  The middle tal smiled so widely his face must hurt.  “Will you allow us to join the Dance?”

“The only tal I’ll discuss challenge with is the one who bears my mark.”  Her lips curved in a fierce smile just as wide.  “He’d better have a care that my Blood don’t carve that mark from his flesh when he approaches me.”

A thought occurred to her that turned her smile of dominance into something closer to seduction, which shook the wide smile off the middle tal’s face.  Indeed, all three stiffened expectantly. 

This Black held her bond.  So she would use it against him.  

The black serpent in her mind coiled tighter and hissed warningly.

She lowered her lashes, turning her head slightly away from them, while she remembered the spicy taste of his blood, his thigh gripped in her jaws, the steel of his erection brushing her cheek, the pleasure that had poured through her from his blood alone.  She ached to taste him again.

The tal with the incredible hair shivered, the black cloak whispering against the grass, betraying his movement.

“The hair,” Sal repeated, shaking his head.

“And the blood.”  Dharman stared at the savage, his muscles straining, his stance widening in aggression.  “Do you desire him now, na’lanna, or later?”

“Later,” she said, shrugging casually, and turned her back on them all.  She even managed to smile at Varne, which made the glowering warrior stumble a step.  “Or perhaps not at all.”

She started back toward Shanhasson, dismissing the Keldari entirely.  A scuffle behind her accompanied a rush of determination through the Black Dragon’s bond.  He surged toward her, ignoring the rahkes flashing at him, the shouted warning from the Sha’Kae al’Dan, and the grim fury of her Blood.  She felt each rahke take a piece of him but he refused to stop, and her Blood knew her heart.

They would not kill him, not unless she wished it, and Lady help her, she didn’t wish him dead.

Shannari didn’t even turn around, but when his hand landed on her shoulder, she whipped the white rahke back into his groin.  Panting, he pressed against her back despite the blade she held.  She was fully prepared to gut him as she’d done to Theo.  The tal’s scent rolled over her, burning sandalwood and blowing desert sands, his hair heavy and soft with oil.

“Or perhaps now,” he whispered against her cheek.

Ever so slowly, she turned her face around toward his, shifting enough to look him in the eye.  “What is your name?” she asked, using the rahke to punctuate her threat.

“Mykal.”    

“Mykal,” she whispered, letting his name roll on her tongue like fine wine.  “If you come with me, I’m going to ask my Blood to pin you flat on your back with their rahkes so I may wallow in your blood and taste every wound we’ve given you.”

His eyes bled silver, his dragon peeking out from behind his dark desert eyes.  “Every wound?”

She nodded slowly.  Lady above, her mouth watered at the thought.

“My heart beats for you, brightheart.”  He pushed harder on her rahke until the blade broke his skin.  His breath sighed out against her lips.  “Do as you will with me.”

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Little Did She Know

…that my head would implode!!!

I saw something yesterday in an online book excerpt (that shall remain nameless) that set my teeth on edge and it’s still bugging me, so I decided to blog about it and share my irritation with you.  Maybe I’ll feel better once I get it off my chest.

<rant>

As a reader, I despise being tricked or lied to. 

Don’t spring a suprise in the final pages that the protagonist supposedly knew all along but kept secret from the reader.  POV characters cannot keep secrets!  Not if the author is writing in deep POV.  It’s impossible.  That particular book was made even worse because the POV was first person, and I was still supposed to believe that little “secret?”  Nope.  Sorry.  It doesn’t work, and I refuse to read that author to this date.

Don’t get me wrong, I loved Sixth Sense.  I loved going back to watch the whole movie and seeing all the little clues.  If you do that as an author and give me those little clues to track and decipher, then I’m one happy camper.  I love tracking the trail of bread crumbs.  (Don’t ask me how many Robert Jordan books I read trying to figure out which sister in the Tower was actually one of the Forsaken.  Don’t even get me started about Jon Snow in George R.R. Martin’s series, because if he’s only yanking my chain, I’m going to be really pissed.)

I don’t want you to tell me the heroine is sooooo smart, only to watch her stumble around in the snowy woods with no coat in the middle of the night without so much as a flashlight even though she knows a serial killer is stalking her, all because she heard a noise.  Surely we’ve learned that lesson from Scary Movie 1, 2, …10…haven’t we?  At least in those movies it was FUNNY and not irritating.

My latest peeve:  I despise being treated like I’m stupid.  The biggest slam to a reader’s intelligence is the “little did she know” trick.  Like I’m too stupid to figure out delicate foreshadowing, so I must be clubbed over the head with “little did she know, but the man she was kissing would kill her before dawn.”  Or “she had absolutely no idea that he was a serial killer.”

If she doesn’t know, how can the reader know if the author is handling POV appropriately?  This is author intrusion and I can. not. stand it.  It absolutely drives me bat-shit crazy, even worse than blatant head hopping.

Give me the unease souring her stomach, the chill clawing down her spine, the hair crawling on her nape, something, but don’t give me “little did she know that danger approached.”

</rant>

Nope, I’m still irritated.  Needless to say, I won’t be buying that book.  (At least it was only an excerpt–think how furious I’d be if I had actually PAID to be irritated!)

What’s one of your reader peeves?

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NaNo Day 32

Up Dark & Early this morning and eager, because I’d dreamed the next part of the section prior to falling completely asleep last night.  I had a moment of panic at first, that I’d forgotten the details, but they came to me after I got going.  I’ve switched POV several times and those sections are short (about 1K each).  I don’t like such short sections, but I can always expand later with more agony and despair.  Haha.

Today: 1,237

NaNo:  70,454

Snippet:  Again, I can’t give too many details else risk spoiling the plot, but I think you can tell from this section that Shannari is in a very bad spot.

:How can I know?:  Despair choked her, even while her fury clawed higher.  The White Dragon screamed inside her, stronger than ever.  Had the bond with the Black given her Dream even greater strength?  :How can I ever trust them again?:

The Black Dragon purred with great enjoyment.  Was he smug because she had no one left to trust?  Or was he still basking in his victory?  :There is a way.:

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NaNo Day 31

Considering today was my first day back at the Evil Day Job after a week of vacation, I’m lucky to get any writing done at all today.  I didn’t make it up Dark & Early, and started work early because I knew I’d have a gazillion e-mails to catch up on.  After resolving half a dozen testing feedbacks or so and sitting through a couple of emergency catch up meetings (no lunch hour to sneak in even a little writing), I think I’m nearly back to square one at work.

So not a lot of wordage tonight, but SIGNIFICANT plot developments.  Oh, I’m doing some bad, bad things.  *laughs wickedly*  Climax One is almost resolved.  I have fallout to deal with, an uneasy truce to work out, and then plot how the second climax will make things even worse.  I feel the downhill slide just around the corner…

Today:  1,310

NaNo Total:  69,217

Snippet:  Again, hard to say much without spoilers, so I can only give little bits.  This is a killer scene.

Dharman pushed up to his elbows and bit back the scream of pain so hard his teeth jammed together.  Steel grated inside him, tearing his internal organs even more, but he flung himself after her.  His body before any threat, so he’d sworn.  The Vulkar-damned beast would have to eat him first.

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NaNo Day 30

It might be the end of November, the official ending of NaNoWriMo, but I have yet to find “The End” of my story, and so the craziness continues.

I had hoped to brainstorm plot with my Beloved Sis yesterday at Granny’s, but while we did talk Story a bit, I didn’t get any brilliant revelations as I hoped.  I still had no idea what was going to happen.

I had stupid dreams all night (yeah, one of those where clothing is missing!) and barely dragged myself up for church after such a hard night.  However, somewhere today, I found the details of the first Climax.

I don’t even remember the exact moment, which is weird.  It must have been gradual, a slow, gentle revelation that built brick by brick until I can see it all so clearly in my mind.  YES.  I know how the Black Dragon wins his way into Shanhasson.  I know a few more tidbits that lead toward the second Climax.  This story is looking like it’ll get a third major twist.  One character I’ve known since Rose is going to betray her.  The intermediate plot point is still foggy, and may be part of the third, I’m not sure yet.  There’s going to be a major decision made in those pages, and I still don’t know that answer.  I guess I’ll see.

Trust the magic, I keep telling myself.  The magic is there and it when it all unravels and becomes clear, I’ll be stunned that such and such had already happened that set everything up perfectly.  It’s happened many times before, but I admitted to Molly yesterday that I always fear THIS will be the time that the magic fails me.

Today:  2,003

Return total:  67,907

Snippet:  Hmmm.  It’s going to be hard.  After all, this is the major climax/surprise plot point, so I don’t want to give anything away.  Basically, three Keldari tals stand at the Shining Gates, and she has no idea which one is the Black Dragon.  She’s not close enough to smell them, and there’s nothing visibly to differentiate one from another.

“We have a custom in the deserts that no tal may be named azi until he claims a White.  You, Your Majesty, are the Last Daughter, the Last White known to us.  We wish to court you.”

She couldn’t help but laugh.  According to the Black Dragon’s Dreams, “courting” meant tossing her to a vengeful dragon who’d rip her limb from limb.  “Surely you jest, gentlemen.”

“Did you not declare a challenge?”  The tal on the left asked, a small smile flickering on his lips so quickly she almost missed it.  The little curl of smugness was awfully familiar.  “If any man wishes to wed you, he must challenge your Blood, iyeh?  We wish to join the challenge.  We three will fight, and the last standing will then fight your Blood.”

“Absolutely out of the question,” she retorted.  Her heart pounded so hard her head echoed with the sound.  Wind nickered, her head swinging to the south with her ears perked expectantly.  No, not her heart, then; the Sha’Kae al’Dan came at a hard gallop up High Road. 

“Interesting,” the tal in the middle said loudly, rolling his eyes at her and pitching his voice to the savages behind him.  “The High Queen is not a woman of her word after all.”

“I had heard there was no challenge she would not meet,” the tal on the right said just as loudly.

“The High Queen of the Green Lands never runs,” the tal on the left whispered, flashing that faint curl of his lips again.  “Yet she runs from us.”

  “Prepare to open the Gates,” she shouted to the men on the wall.  The tals smiled, sharing condescending, knowing glances at one another.  Lady above, she hoped that Khul rode them all down like dogs as he brought his warriors into Shanhasson.